I would like for people to read my poetry and find something in it that is meaningful to them. If they read it on my blog or in a book, matters not to me.
This past week has been a hard one, and this poem says it all for me.
we could go to begin anew,
where all our grief and heartaches,
could be dropped like a shabby old coat
at the door, never to wear again.
In this place where all is fresh,
the sun would shine through gentle rain.
Snow would melt in our warm hands
before it could freeze a single rose.
In a land of new beginnings, only joy
would make us weep. No hurt, no pain
would scar our thinking capability.
We’d leave it all behind
like the wake of a ship on blue seas.
I wish there were a place like this
where mourning ceases to exist. I’d go
there, never leave. I’d breathe the pristine
atmosphere, feel healing flow through me,
shedding uncertainty like a chameleon sheds its skin.
before it could freeze a single rose.
In a land of new beginnings, only joy
would make us weep. No hurt, no pain
would scar our thinking capability.
We’d leave it all behind
like the wake of a ship on blue seas.
I wish there were a place like this
where mourning ceases to exist. I’d go
there, never leave. I’d breathe the pristine
atmosphere, feel healing flow through me,
shedding uncertainty like a chameleon sheds its skin.
---Glenda Council Beall
Thank you.
ReplyDeleteI wish. How I wish...
I love your poem and sank into it with all the sorrow/pain/hope/love that life has to offer. Not possible to pull off the old coat and start anew, but I find meditating does help lower the pain, freshen up the hope and find the joy inside. xo
ReplyDeleteBeing old-fashioned, I guess, I still like poetry that rhymes, but the words here are lovely. "where we only weep from joy" Love it.
ReplyDeleteThere is a softness in your words that meets the subject with a tenderness for me. Thanks for the post. And my favorite line "...only joy would make us weep."
ReplyDeleteThank you, Ayer and Pam, for your kind words about my poem. I can tell you felt it.
ReplyDeletePaula, thank you for stopping in and reading my poem. That line seems to touch everyone.
ReplyDeleteEC, yes we can wish, can't we?
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words, dear Glenda. I love the dropping of the shabby old coat.
ReplyDeleteMarsha, so good to hear from you. You will always hold a very special place in my heart. When I think of kind and caring you come to mind.
ReplyDeleteGlenda