The use of metaphor increases the reader's understanding and draws him deeper into the poem. I learned to use at least one metaphor in every poem I write.
Our Loss
for
my brother, Ray
Family,
like
threads tightly woven
in a
fine tapestry --
fiery
reds, cool blues, pale yellows.
Family,
like the
petals of a rosebud
curving
close around each other,
maturing,
gently falling
to die
upon the ground.
Family,
like a
clump of grass.
Disturb
one blade,
affect
all that remain.
You were
plucked from us,
and now
we don't know
which
way to lean
when the
winds blow.
----Glenda Council Beall